A new poem.

I’ve had a video uploading to youtube for 48 hours. I’m not sure if I should keep waiting or not. This is really irritating. For now you can enjoy another poem I wrote for creative writing.


Oh if I could be un-
interrupted by wandering eyes
and shifting feet.

I would stop, accept the pain
of disinterest, except I might
expose your offense and offend.

To be aware, yet share,
my excitement of thought extinguished,
extinguishes your smoldering interest.

2 Responses to “A new poem.”

  1. Pepijn says:

    Just upload it on another service 😉

    Good Luck!

  2. Daniel says:

    Thanks! I found the problem and just tried again. It worked. I’ll post the update in a little bit.

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